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Tuesday, 14 November 2017

Scary Great white sharks

WALT Write a poem about your favorite animal

Great White Sharks

 I Like Great white sharks

I like them

Ask me why?

Because they sneak on their prey

Because their the oceans best predator I would say

Because they are very large

Because they are very strong

Because their considered man eaters although that is wrong

Because their made of cartilage and swim very long

Because They are shy

Because their skin is always camouflaged under the sea which is reflected by the beautiful sky.

Because…….

Because…….

That’s why I like Great white sharks

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1 comment:

  1. Anonymous6 December 2017 at 10:35

    Hi Hayden, it's Nika from Room 8. I enjoyed the part when you put "Because there the oceans best predator I would say" because you put some of your perspective in to your poem. Maybe next time you could add some colours and pictures. My class did this as well. Whats your favourite land animal

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